Well after the first cut had just been a guideline to follow so that our group could point out the faults and the positive aspects of 'City Rush' which could never have been perfect on the first try.

The problems that we had noticed in the first cut were just slight changes to one of these was the sound at the end of the film, instead of having it fade out in sound to the sounds of a train which just didn't seem to fit the scene, so we substituted it for some sirens giving some sense of a cliffhanger.

The reason we wanted to have a cliffhanger was because we could only do two minutes of the film so our intentions from the start were to make people want to carry on watching if we were able to do a full feature length, this then makes our film begin to look more realistic for the short clip.

The film seems to fit well with the music that we have chosen it seems to have a certain sense of melodramatic tension as the terrorist is silent and does not speak, reason being is because sometimes this can break the mystery we have created with our actor performance.

In conclusion to the first cut we can clearly say that the second has benefit us in some way making it unique to the other groups pieces which makes it stand out rather then be the same kind of thing, our genre was action and i believe we met all the criteria for this.